Whispers

by *Charisma*   Jan 31, 2007


These whispers haunt me
Constantly telling me
I can't ever have you.

My fears still follow me
Tears keep consuming me
I don't know what to do.

I don't want to pretend anymore
What good is pretending for

There just lies I must dance around
Keeping hidden things I want to be found.

She's beautiful, I'm sure
Must be to steal your heart
When will you see me?

I feel so plain and unnoticed
A fuzzy image in your mind
How long must this be?

Can't I just tell you that I love you.
Walking away would mean were through.

And I haven't even had a chance to say,
I'm sorry words failed me before today.

Do you love me too?

*Random thoughts, unusual rhyme sscheme. I'd love thoughts on this one. Thanks!*

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  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    COMMENT # 1 (comment from contest)
    aww.. this is cute.. very simple and yes a little scattered but i think it sounds fine.. but its totally okay.. we all need to write just to let things out sometimes and everything we write isnt a masterpiece.. but this is a cute poem..

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    A lot of emotion and very sad.
    Nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Unique structure and rhyme scheme. I still like it though. It pours with emotions. Nice job!