Unique structure and rhyme scheme. I still like it though. It pours with emotions. Nice job!

A lot of emotion and very sad.
Nice job.

COMMENT # 1 (comment from contest)
aww.. this is cute.. very simple and yes a little scattered but i think it sounds fine.. but its totally okay.. we all need to write just to let things out sometimes and everything we write isnt a masterpiece.. but this is a cute poem..