by shawn
It's nice, i liked it, and it's very true. 5/5 Gotta love the simple things in life! |
by Tammie
Short and sweet. I kind of found it funny in a way, but not in a bad way. I think how you wrote this is a really unique way of showing your feelings. Nice work. =] 5/5 |
Different and original. So much said in so few words. Can't really find anything to give critique on.. Nice write. |
by ShaKayla
I really liked it, that was cute. I really liked it because it was so different. Very original. |
Short and to the point, I loved it. I am sure there are a lot that can relate to what you wrote. Nicely pened like always. |
Hello |
by Mousie
God how do you make such a small amount of words so powerful? you always leave me wondering with those poems, i love it! another beautiful job 5/5 |
by shela
Hi my dear and favorite poet |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Aww. that is cute. it made me smile, big change considering im reading this really sad book. there are a few things id fix in this poem however. 1. enthusiatic doesn't soung right in the poem. 2. the title could be worked on. |
by Cella Bella
I really like this poem. It's... cute. lol. It made me smile. It's very touching. 5/5 |
Wow I really liked this one.. very short but its a very sweet message. My favorite idea was how you didnt go overboard on stuff like roses and flowers and beautiful things, just straight to the point. A Very refreshing read under this category. Well done. |
I like this its kinda funny ... in a weird way...oo but not in a bad way. i think its nice i like this 5.5 great job |
by Unknown Soul
Wow very good.....its rly nice plus funny too....as in kurdish "zor basha". if u understand |
That made me smilee` .[: It`s got a cute side to it, sweet without being corny . I loved it . Short but sends an ah`dorable message . It`s refreshing -- And I love how it`s different from other poems . |
This is cute I enjoyed it |
by N M Lambert
Original and unique. had to read this one twice! good poem x |
Cute! Short, sweet, and to the point 5/5 |
by Leslie
I like the beginning better than the end, but the whole poem is really good. |
by Kenny
Nice poem! Love It!! |
by yo yo yo
I cant believeee how amazing this poem is .. it says so much in such few words .. i love it .. |