Om this was really good! i absolutely loved the structure and the words used. it was a great poem!! keep up the great work!! very well written. xx

This is a piece of beauty. I was mesmerized with your words. Totally pulled into this poem.
Innocent heart, trust me with every beat
I'll be yours for the rest of my days
Time has come to burn our fading passion
For which I have been holding for you my grace
This just melted my heart. Your words in this piece are like a beautiful love song. Excellent! ~Bravo~ Your friend Cindy

Beautiful.. I think dear Cindy described it best. The words flowed like water, it was excellent as all your work is! Well done! Nice to see you back and writing!
5/5
*Gem*

Very good write. many beautiful words. very nicely put together.

This is so pretty. Love the romantic tone and wistfulness of the whole piece. I especially like these lines:

"Shine your blue eyes on my shadow
Before my destiny pushes you far away"

A pleasure to read! 5/5 Debbie

This was very nice and beautiful.
Great Job.

I had to come back and read this again. It is truely one of my favorite poems. You did an amazing job on this. Thinking of you Cindy

A sweet passion i see expressed, a lovely read.

I really liked this poem. It had a lot of emotion. So well written too. Exellent read! 5/5

marcella

Very interesting comparisons that talk about the very essence of love - great job, nitin!

peace
shobhana