Wow, this is so sad. =[ really well written, and emotional.

there are some issues with flow, but the rhyming remains perfect. =]

5/5
x

This has so many emotions on so many levels, it may stop someone from becoming like this because they becom scared of the reality you put into your poem. Or maybe it may help people relate to their own feelings and why they do it.

really god job.

xxx alex xxx