The Fallen Angel (acrostic)

by Afraid of the Dark   Jan 31, 2007


Torn wings run red,
He lies in blood he's bled,
Eternally fallen from overhead.

Flowing sweet tears,
An angel cleansed from all fears.
Learn from his mistake,
Learn as you see his heart break,
Eternally fallen from spring,
Now feathers fall from his wing.

A good life to be like him,
Not like this so grim,
Getting his wings, learn how to fly,
Eternally fallen, don't cry,
Live, die, fly in the sky.

*If you don't know, an acrostic poem has a message made from the beginning of each line. . . or i think thats waht it is. . . anyway thats what i have done*

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  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Really good job with this piece.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    The poem is great, but I don't like last stanza. You have great vocab. Rhyming is interesting and atmosphere is unique. I like it very much, 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I gave this poem a 5/5 simply because your vocab was outstanding in this poem. For an acrostic this poem flowed nicely and showed a great meaning behind it. You portrayed this poem really well. Good job~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Nice poem. acrostics are my favorite. You wrote this very well. You kept a really great flow throughout. 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This was a really great poem and I love the way it was written - the flow was there and it had great meaning - it was perfect 5/5

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