This was a really great poem and I love the way it was written - the flow was there and it had great meaning - it was perfect 5/5

Nice poem. acrostics are my favorite. You wrote this very well. You kept a really great flow throughout. 5/5

marcella

I gave this poem a 5/5 simply because your vocab was outstanding in this poem. For an acrostic this poem flowed nicely and showed a great meaning behind it. You portrayed this poem really well. Good job~mel

The poem is great, but I don't like last stanza. You have great vocab. Rhyming is interesting and atmosphere is unique. I like it very much, 5/5.

Really good job with this piece.