by Cindy
Wow! Excellent write. The imagenary in this write is astounding! Your word choices great! 5/5 |
by debbylyn
I can picture it all....you have a way of bringing things to life with your words! Well done. 5/5. |
by debbylyn
I can picture it all....you have a way of bringing things to life with your words! Well done. 5/5. |
by Rachel RTVW
Dark rendition! Great job. Again, good rhythm and rhyme. |
by Cindy
I don't know who down voted this write, but they do not know talent when it is staring them in the face. Keep writing! Again Excellent job! |
Very nice 5/5 |
by LonelyEmo7
Awesome! |
by lovely
Amazing. it's beautiful and true. |
by Gem
I've gotta say. Cindy was right when she told me to check your poems out. |
by Jason
An exceptionaly penned poem. The rhyme adds to the excellent flow of this one. You have captured the essence of Armagadon perfectly. |
by Miss Sorrow
That was very nice. 5 out of 5! |
Sweet poem, dark and yet insightful |
by Refinnej Sin
If these words mean anything, m'lad...that was like a dream-bar. and i love dream-bars lol |
by Areia
Ooh . . . dark and twisty, just like licorice. I like it! |
I lv it gr8 wrk |