Great poem i really liked it and i can relate to what you are saying. keep it up shanik

Great write! You've got alot of talent at such a young age. I can't even imagine what your writting will become in a few years. :] 5/5

marcella

Hey this is a nice poem, i will read more later. i love them all so far!

5/5 david

Another fantastic poem.

You write so maturely I can hardly believe your age, i hope that the pain in your words is not the pain that you feel in reality.

Stay inspired, and inspiring others.

Honeypot x

It may be confusing but a good poem for me is one that i do have to read over a few times to really take it in, wi picked up more of it when i read it the second time and on the third time i understood it completely! great work hun!

xoxo Lucy

Great poem, it was a rad confusing but the overall message was nice

It wasn't that confusing, I understood it, anyways, you did a great job, the flow was great, the word choice was excellent, the emtion was strong, Perfectly done 5/5

Beautiful poem...just 13 and you've penned this one so so beautifully...i did'nt find it all that confusing...the choice of words was superb so was the flow smooth

Excellent job!
5/5

xxPoojaxx