Weak

by Ashley   Jan 31, 2007


Saw you today
Cant miss that smile
Looks like I wont be seeing that
For a while

Cant take this much longer
I wanna break down
But I gotta stay stronger
I wont cry in front of you

It's wierd seeing you in the hallways
I'm so accustomed to us together
Its hard to get used to us apart
I need you now.....

Put my whole soul into this
So much youd never know
Thats why its soooo hard
So hard to let you go

My heart is growing weary
My wall is crumbling down
I'm so far gone
I'm oblivious to any movements or sound

I'm weak
Though I wanna be strong
Im gonna go crazy
It wont be too long

Try to imagine
That I didnt hear you say
That it will be over
The date is today

The dam has been broken
The tears are streaming down
I'm just glad that
No ones around....

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a good poem. But you have some minor errors in it..

    I need you now(.....)
    ellipses: 3 dots

    (Im) weak
    = I'm

    Also try to eliminate some I's coz it meses up the flow.

    Nonetheless it was a good poem.