What We'll Never Be*

by lost in lovee   Jan 31, 2007


Sitting here writing,
Don't know what to think,
You being with her...
You were my everything.

Now I'm here
Speechless.
My world came crashing down,
When I found out.

I always thought we'd be friends,
But she has tore us apart.

We were always close,
But deep inside I wanted us
To be closer.

Now you'll never know,
Now you'll never see,
My true feelings for you,
What we'll never be.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is my favourite of your's that I have read.
    The pain behind the words are clear to see, and the imagery was really good.
    I think you did an excellent job on this.

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    I like this one the best. 4/5 i like how your poems are about feeling. nicejob.

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    AWWW!!! this is too cute and too sad.. a very heartfelt poem.. wonderful write!

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    Awww that feeling is horrible watching the person your in love with be with somebody else, great poem so much emotion to it.
    I thought the last four lines were great!!!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    That was really good! I liked it! a lot! keep up the amazing work hun, 5/5

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