That was really good! I liked it! a lot! keep up the amazing work hun, 5/5

Awww that feeling is horrible watching the person your in love with be with somebody else, great poem so much emotion to it.
I thought the last four lines were great!!!
5/5

AWWW!!! this is too cute and too sad.. a very heartfelt poem.. wonderful write!

I like this one the best. 4/5 i like how your poems are about feeling. nicejob.

This is my favourite of your's that I have read.
The pain behind the words are clear to see, and the imagery was really good.
I think you did an excellent job on this.