Twisted fate

Good, very good, if i mite add, its a deep poem that persuades the viewer to become pensive, i like it, keep the good work up!!:)

Nice it's short but I really like it, good job, The only thing i would switch would be the last line I'd switch it to
"darkness "and" hate" But that could change the meaning of the poem, either way I still love it, Keep up the good work =)