Great poem i loved it i can really relate to what you are saying. keep it up shanik

Sad but beautiful poem, btw thank you very much for your comment on my poem. Great Job!

I loved this poem it's really good, and i know what it's like to have to cry yourself to sleep. anyways keep up the great work and thank you for the comment. shanik

In this one the repetition of "Please come save me from this hell ride," was good because it was quite a meaningful line.
I wasn't keen on the rhyme, to be honest it was ordinary and somewhat forced.
Thanks for sharing.

Hey Anonymous Angel! Great poem! I liked this one cause it rhymed and it had a flow and rhythm.... it was pretty sad though.

* Thank you for checking out my poems. =)

Hey I like the rhyme in this poem :) it flowed well. I really felt the emotion in this poem keep it up! 5/5! and thanks by the way for your comment :) tc

Great Job, I saw your post after I closed it, I would never turn my back on someone who was doing me a favor..:) Great poem...especially liked the way it was not necessarily organized every 4-6 or 8 lines in a stanza...the most amazing poems are scattered across the page...why use only 4"x3" of the page when there are 8x11" to utilize...great job, 5/5 -Unattractive1

Nicelyy written, I like the repetition of certain phrases. The flow was good, keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

Great poem thanks for your comment on "Kinky"

Oh man this poem got me all teary lol.. very good.. i can relate to most of your poems.. im going to add u to my favorates. keep writing. 5/5

Cool poem. I really liked it. The flow was once again wonderful. I really enjoyed the word choice and the rhyming was great. I gave it a 5/5.

Hey,
you did a really great job on this poem. The flow was excellent and you put meaning behind it 5/5 <33

The repitition was nice, not too overbearing. The rhymes were rather simple, but the flow was flawless. You should capitilize your I's as well. 5/5

marcella

Aww, thid made me a bit sad =[[ but it's really good. Great job 5/5

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Powerful, with excellently expressed emotions. I can deeply relate to this piece, you filled it with a lot of feelings.
I like your choice of words here, and the flow that you created.
Keep writing!

This is beautifully written; you did a great job. i really like your technique, your style. keep it up.

thanks for your comment ;)