Vermilion Kisses

by Lady Nik   Jan 31, 2007


It this goodbye.
Or is this death.
I wonder, because I am so desolate.
But who is to blame.
For my dreams are tarnished and my time is useless.
And all you have to offer is vermilion kisses.
Should I stay or trust my heart.
Something tells me this is wrong, but I love it.
Your scent is absolutely perfect. And your voice is just right.
It's hot enough to make me melt.
I can't imagine myself with some one else.

*I don't really write love poems so I'm taking a risk, so please tel what you think. Thank you Shanik*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tony

    I thought you need to incorporate more or an emotional theme. I think the peom is good but the subject is weak and your trying to force the feeling. Unless that is the point then very very well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Im Not Emo

    Hey AWESOME POEMS, ive read half so far and love them all, and now im gonna read the rest! glad you like mine, i try to add some everyday so check em out,THX

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    I loved this, it was really good, thx for your comment on my poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    A lovely poem, see you can write love poems =) 5/5

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