A lovely poem, see you can write love poems =) 5/5

I loved this, it was really good, thx for your comment on my poem

Hey AWESOME POEMS, ive read half so far and love them all, and now im gonna read the rest! glad you like mine, i try to add some everyday so check em out,THX

I thought you need to incorporate more or an emotional theme. I think the peom is good but the subject is weak and your trying to force the feeling. Unless that is the point then very very well done.