Comments : Except The Ashes

  • Jews right, very insiderish ... if that's a word, anyways Loved the poem, great vocab and way of switching the words, um a liitle forced but other then that great!!!

    -Emia Nicole

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    WOW! This poem was amazing! I have added you to my favs. You are sooo talented. Loved the flow, rhyme, and power of this poem! It was truly amazing!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    I couldnt help but cry after reading this, my grandpa was at this camps, i think you did a wonderful job on this one ciao, great poem, as always a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by s.u.r.r.e.n.d.e.r

    Hey wow! fabuous poem that was awesome i loved it.. it was really nice good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow. loved it! the detailing and flow was perfect, and it really sucked me into this. keep up the great work! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    WOW!...that was fkn amazing!

    VERY VERY VERY well written...u even bryan cry...shame on u ciao lol jk

    102931908319031893724209437102834702871089247.511 to the power of 19813 twice removed to the left 6 times...out of 5

    great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by TimidOutburst

    This poem was absolutely incredible!!! I mean....wow! That was just...oooh, speechless! Very moving and powerful, and everything was worded beautifully! Keep up the amazing work, and you're going on our favorites! :) :) :) Thanks for the comment too!
    ~TimidOutburst

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh..wow.
    This was so sad, yet so beautful.
    The imagery used in this was fantastic, the flow worked well and the first stanza was such a great opener.