Comments : My first broken heart

  • This was really good and very sad. I loved it. Very well written.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This poem is really good. i loved it. i wanted to cry, that's how much i can relate to what you are saying, keep it up shanik

  • 17 years ago

    by repair her heart

    Really sad..i have been there.this poem had a good flow, well written, and kept my attention through out it!kee it up!