Wow.....just wow...Casey that has got to be the best poem you have ever done....i seriously think thats better than most of my poems...no joke...i love this poem...you had great imagry and the point of view with the speaking was amazing, this is absolutely awsome. It would be a three thumbs up if i had three thumbs...but i can only give you two :( but its definatly a 5/5!!! beautiful write casey.

Oh Em Gee Panda!!!
This poem is so awesome.
5/5 Deffinatly
Like, I am speechless so im blabbering on
But dude, Panda, This Poem Is So Good!!!

Amazing quality! and you're younger than me???????? wow, im jealous!!!!!!!!!

AWWWWWW this is going on my favorites

it's so sweet

The poem is more than awesome...I'm touched and impressed...
The feeling of getting hurt and mistreated by people,is so bad and really hurts inside but all the pain goes away when we go back to God to save us from ourselves and from others.

Ur poem is so simple and so true...And with a short story,u mentioned the truth and the mighty of God that he is the only saver and the healer of all our suffering...

Great job...I enjoyed reading it
Keep up the good work5/5..