Pieced Together

by Angie   Jan 31, 2007


Pieced Together

a heart torn
by lack of faith and trust
not knowing if or when
it will heal from this disgust

but one magical evening
this heart was gently pieced together
by a sensitive caring man
whose love I will forever treasure

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    This is such a specail poem for you I can understand. You have added so much of meaning in to it with those very precise wordings. God bless you

    With love
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    *High Five*

    Definately one of my faves! ;o)

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    Short, but lovely! Great job! 5/5 :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Short, yet powerful.
    You get so many strong emotions out in such a short poem. You managed to get the point and emotions across clearly. Overall, fantastic job! Keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Demise

    Very short but very well writen love it, keep it up =)