I'm going through something kinda like that i faked it for so long and then i stoped fakeing it,and people thought i wasjust acting like i felt this way and then,i justed stoped talking all together and the really sad part was none of my friends really tired to talk to me,or really try at all anymore. . . i was trying so hard to write a poem about it. . .and well great job you really manged to get your feelings out in this poem i'm sure many others can also relate. . .awsome poem,keep up the good work
auna

Wow.. awesome.

did u notice ur about to hit 200 poems? ;)

:P i resorted to a makeover before i hit middle school: turn from total goth into... well... hmm... ME!

:\ how'd u break? im sorry about that :\ as sad at it may seem, you may not find that restart button in thin air... but it's there. every day is a chance to turn over a new leaf!

this myt seem weird, but it's nice:

this entire week, i've been writing notes to myself. they usually go like this:

from: me
to: me

Hi! What's up? Just in case you're having a bummer of a day, I want you to know that I will never betray you! You are nice, sweet, caring, and funny! Not to mention smart and pretty... don't let people get you down! And for God's sake, have some faith in yourself! You are an awesome person! You've got guts!

~hehe... they make me feel better when my day seems to suck~

- -- Rain -- -

oh... and here's a message for someone...

From: JR
To: WC

Hey, what's up? Something bad? Try not to get down... no guy can make up for the love you have to give yourself! I know that 'he' might, but a lot of those 'he's' arent in the perfect relationship w/ u. Think of it this way: you guys had many wonderful memories!!

and... why should you not feel bad about yourself? Your sense of humor is fresh; a lot better than the 'yo mama' jokes :) and you're very considerate... along with being an excellent writer!

~Dreams are the hopes you search for every night... and hopes are the dreams you take with you through the day...~

~Bye,

Rain

I loved this, it's one of my favourites of your's.

But right now I'm as volnurable as a soldier in an open war field.

I think you meant vulnerable there.

Apart from that tiny error, there's really nothing bad I have to say about this poem, you outdid yourself.