Blood's sweet toxicity

by Lauren Waszkiewicz   Feb 1, 2007


Running through the forest at midnight,
Atmosphere black as pitch
No moon or stars are out tonight,
Ready for the fight for your life?

Now the prey in the hunt, he should have known
That such a soul should have be left alone.
Smell sickly sweet that odor? Lying on your breath?
Thats the tragic scent, of forbidden love's death.

Verboten love's tantalizing kiss.
Has left you in a troublesome abyss.
Protection now, is what you miss.
All from a simple, yet deadly kiss.

Vampyric blood flows through your soul
Do not fight it, 'tis what makes you whole
One which thrives, in the darkest of night,
Should not try, to be a fool of the light.

How asinine, Darling you have been.
Foolish, desperate Vampyric child.
Pretending to be a normal human within,
When in fact you are immortal, sinful, and wild.

Now you've let go of your insecurities,
and realized humans are simply impurities
So from the thrill of the chase feel true felicity
and taste the kiss of blood's sweet toxicity

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  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    This isn't a poem I would usually read and LOL dont hurt me but I have trouble with poems with words I dont know.
    hehe

    But I really did enjoy this poem, Loved the vampire-ness of it and the words you used that I knew were beautiful.

    very well written poem.

    Sorry this comment is shorter than my others but It was still a great poem.

    well done
    ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by unblue skye

    That wuz AWESOME! :) i loved it!! it kept meh racing to read to the end!! hhaha~ very good...gave meh chills! the sorta thing i like :) XD 5/5!!

    --**Skye~

    -Check out some of my poems!! Thanks!-

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Rhyming was nice
    flow pefect
    word choice- the arrangement was unique.

    Verboten love's tantalizing kiss.
    Has left you in a troublous abyss.
    Protection is now what you miss.
    All from a simple, yet deadly kiss.

    i liked the rhyming pattern for this stanza. it hisses at you. i dont know if this was intentional, but the onomatopeoia gives it a serpine eeryie feeling, like of the vampire.

    <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Wow. This poem is great! I love the vocab you used.

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    The rhyming wasn't thorough through out.. It was pretty much scattered.. But I still really liked it. It was very deep & dark. Powerful, really. The word choice was great.

    Vocabulary was incredible :]

    Thats the tragic scent of forbidden love's death.

    Verboten love's tantalizing kiss.
    Has left you in a troublous abyss.
    Protection is now what you miss.
    All from a simple, yet deadly kiss.

    ^ Deffinitley my favorite lines.. Just so beautiful & breathtaking.

    Bri x

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