by Lonely Little Dreamer Feb 1, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
No sound to be heard. |
Very intersting poem, and very sad. I like the idea, but I think that the poem would be a bit better if you were to take out some of the I's Me's that kinda of thing, its kinda tricky to do in the beginning but once you get the hang of it it makes your poetry much much better. Just some words of advice that I got once that helped me so I figured I'd pass them along. |