You, She

by Allis MT   Feb 1, 2007


Tender pierced heart
aches.
Severed vitals burst

Bonding words free
self-loathing;
climax to hate

Craved infliction,
Incision\'s relief:
Salted streams and blood.

Unstable balanced between
unceased misery or
immidiate release.

The Moment tarries
silence. Then.
A final ecstasytic surge

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A different type of material for a change. I wrote this in spanish class, so that should tell you how much I like that class.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Well written. I did read it twice though to really understand it,b ut that may be because i'm sick and my head is all cloudy lol. Overall I really enjoyed reading it. Great originality!
    5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Haha. spanish looks like a good language....is it just the teacher and how boring she/he is? i liked the poem. the way it's written. theres this strong feeling in it, and the rhyythm, the breaking, was really nice. good poem.