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by Kelsey Feb 1, 2007 category : Sadness, depression / other
I need you to listen I need to you care I can't take it no more It doesn't seem fair What have I done to deserve this? Nothing I can recall... It hurts to get called all those names; And yet, I still try to stand tall I'm so close to giving up on life There's nothing left here for me Sometimes, I just feel like dying Sometimes, I want so bad to be free. I won't do anything That, I promise to everyone; But I just hate who I've become; Can I be undone? Am I that bad of a child? To make you call me all these names? I wonder if you know how much they hurt; To both of you, this could also just be a game But this could be my fate. Or maybe karma coming back around... I kinda hate them both They both make me frown. Is this how my life will I alwas be? I bet so. Will I get used too it soon? I hope so, but as of right now, my life kinda blows.
by David
I need you to listen I need to you care I can't take it no more It doesn't seem fair the first para so powerfully grabbed me. well done. it pushed me into this poem. i loved it! the rest was just as amazing. but i still... just love the start. bravo! 5/5 david