Lovely work....cute...very cute write..i thought it'd be full sad poem..lol...but i like the way it turned out"Happy ending"..lol...i did'nt find any errors in this 1...great work..kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

The emotin of confusion, sadness and also hope scream though the words in this.
Flow was good for the most part, but there were times when it seemed a little shaky.
Apart from that however, you did a good job.

Aww so sad but yet soo sweet though ... it made me cry a little lol .... Sandra ... you have pure talent and I hope you really never stop writing because otherwise it would be just a big waste... good job and keep up with your amazing writings

I dont think you really gave the reader why you feel so enclined to jump there was no real solid reason to take the pundge other then that the flow was good the message was abit uninformed but it was ok nice try Plot121...

I like dark poems with happy endings
love seems to save the day in this poem that reflects the familiar theme that the darkest hour comes right before the dawn

So should I jump?
I should've known you'd save me.
I never doubted you,
And you've saved my life again.

This is another superb poem of you. Great wordings and great flow. well structured and very well penned. Keep it up 5/5

Fsams

That a good reason to keep living in this world and it give all of us who are hopless out there a reason to "step back". it give everyone eventhe extremely happy one a reason to look back at their lives, back to when we all felt the same way as some one eles did. even if it was just once and they don't remember it. so thx this poem give us all a reason to keep living. hope it reaches the right people out there. great job beautiful poem:~)Sam

I really love the way you wrote this poem. You've used questions at the beginning of the stanza's to show the meaning of the poem. Very impressed on how this one was written! And glad I've read it :) 5/5