Great piece of work hun def 5/5 kepp writing and take care sarah x

The flow of that poem was utterly amazing! that had amazing immagery and was a superb metaphor. u should spell check the last stanza for the word "the" just to let you know.

Beautifully written!! It had a very nice flow to it. I enjoyed reading it very much so.

marcella

This poem was great. the flow was wonderful & so was the choice of words. great job! 55/

This poem was great i loved the emotion up put in it ur a great writer keep it up 5/5

LOVE IT...and im actually serious..like i imagined the whole poem in my head and it was such a clear picture, and im a sucker for a great flow so your poem to me was perfect...the last two lines are prob my fav , awesome way to end the poem:)

I thought this was beautifully written.
Nice job.

Another amazing write. Loved the flow with this poem and how you portrait the message "don't believe everything you see". One minor typo though... "What appears white to teh eye" should be "the eye". Other then that... excellent... 5/5

Note: you wrote "teh" instead of "the" lol nice poem. not my favorite but it has a nice flow, orderly rhyming pattern, and makes sense.. 5/5