Even the imagination of this pain hurts but then as said earlier....u r one strong lady....inspiration for many.

very nicely expressed the empty desires.....happiness and pain in dreams. loved ur poem a lot dear...touched me in many ways

all the best and take care

Sad and beautiful love poem. A joy to read as always. 5/5

This was so sad but I'm glad you have memories that you can treasure and that can warm your heart.
You're poems are amazing.

What a wonderfully touching poem. Very soulful and mourning, while celebrating a love cut short. I'm kind of hard hearted, but this poem touched me.

This is excellent. the word set out was perfect and really emphasised how great a writer you are. perfect.

5/5 David

5/5 Love is precious and should be appreciated by everyone. Perfect!

I don't know what i'd do if i ever lost Marcus.. although i now know where you're coming from with the feelings of loss, you almost feel cheated by life in a way..
Beautiful poem as always
5/5
*Gem*

Nice poem girl, lol
i always love this topic of love, ha the variations of it are astounding
keep it up
thanks for chekin out my poems

"feeling nothing for so long, only just in my dreams. Dreams can't keep you warm, its all i have it seems". what a awesome stanza. great job. 5/5

Well done Cindy.
another lovely poem. keep writing
your friend,Tara-Kay

Very beatifully writen 5/5 =)

Wow, I feel like giving you a hug. Thats a very good way of expressing your feelings. Nice poem.

Awe what a sweet comment from Jason. I will give you a hug for him when I see you! A sweet and sad piece you have here. Nice job!

Well done Cindy!!!!
You always write from the heart...

Wonderful cindy, another masterpiece.

Cindy,
Such a touching love poem.
Leaves the reader with feelings of sadness felt within.
I wouldn't dare imagine my life without those that I love, I just couldn't go on.
As a reader, I can tell that all of your poems come straight from deep within your heart & which is why I look forward to reading your work.
Fabulous job, hun!
Stay strong! .+.

Stephanie Lynn

Very good work you are a great writer. good work

So moving each poem different ....
very touching ......
Another one off....of love.

Hey cindy, this poem is really really good. It has so much feeling in it and it is so sad. I loved it.. 5/5

Awwww
There was a time of happiness
When we were still together
Before death stole you away
Leaving me alone forever

these words bring a drop of tear in my eyes. i think there is no word to explain this poem. because this poem is more than every word. the feelings of your love showed completely. and the saddness relate to me.
how good this is!! to love somoone so truley and deeply. may you live long.