The beauty that surrounds me

by kimara4955   Feb 1, 2007


The beauty that surrounds me
yet nobody can see .
nature and nurture once existed
but now it is no longer of eye ,
today i saw your real beauty untainted
to others no longer dated.
the shimmer of the glorious night sky,
reflection in that stunning blue fall that passes me by
the myriad floor beneath my feet
is of a certain heat.

not yet finished I'm not good at nature poems but i want to know what you think i could in prove on, as most of my poems are sad.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is a great piece. It stands well as is, but if you add more it may enhance the beauty and flow you've already captured here. You have an original voice/wording in this piece. I love the ending.
    Peace, Poetry & Power,
    Gary Jurechka

  • 17 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Not bad werent as gd as others tho 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by aknives sweet kiss

    So far its well written and awesome keep up the awesome work

  • 17 years ago

    by struggling

    This poem is lovely i love it its great. Keep up the good work.5/5.
    ~Shareeda

  • 17 years ago

    by Solus

    Beauty can die...as all things can....

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