Waiting.......

I give this poem a 5 because it sounds so fantastic. these are things i think about in free time when there is nothing else to do. i like to wonder into a world where everything goes my way. and i have back what i once had. where i wonder what we would be doing if he were still here. there aint no doubt that we wouldnt be together. we were so deeply in love nothing would have stood in our way. it was something no one could break until he moved. now there is another girl in my place.

That was really good!!!...i liked it alot...short and sweet...comment back!!...5/5 from me!

Wow, thats what i thought be4 i got with my partner. 5 from me, keep them coming, you are a wonderful poet