by debbylyn Feb 1, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
The seventh of December |
by Jenni Marie
Now this was amazing. I found it both original and unique in concept, and the words were written with such beauty and elegance. the imagery you portrayed in this was beautifully captured. there were one or two lines were i thought the flow could be better, but apart from that, beautiful work on this. |
This is so so effectively written, though i guess u mentioned abt Pearl Habour...i m not sure abt the places...but i really loved the selection of words and the wya u presented the whole incident. U r really a very talented poet. |
by Liz
I don't even know how to comment your poems. This was just so amazing. I wish I could say more than that. A trully inspiring write. 5/5. |
by Corinne
A very well crafted poem |
by KemistryKia
Very moving |