by SilentRebuke Feb 1, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
A brief moment in time, a single blink |
by Krathia
The last two lines were simply spectacular. 'Treacherous heart', indeed! Good poem. |
by *Charisma*
WOW! You are sooo good! Your ending to this was like the punch in the poem and it was amazing. I think this poem has touched me the most thus far! |
by Midnight Sun
This really is good, Girl. You did an excellent job writing from this point of view. And so many...too many...teens think too late about what they've done, instead of just stopping and saying no. So sorry this happened to her. But I'm sure she'll get the strength she needs. Keep strong (just like with everyone else that's done this) (*sigh*) |