by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup Feb 1, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
God, |
by Princess
How sad.. i realli like it tho 5/5=]] |
by umbra
There are times when repetition is bad, but in this poem it fits so well. It brings a tear to my eye. I'm so sorry for what happened, but she is in a better place now. Thanks to this poem many more people will know a little bit about a girl who they had no idea existed until now. |
by Kristina
Soo soo sad. i'm so sorry for your lost, i know what it's like. you did a very good job on writing this poem! 5/5 |
I can tell your hurting when you wrote this but im just not feeling the loss. my mood did not change from the moment i started reading this poem to the moment i finished. pretty good just not the best |
by kiesha
This is a really beautiful poem. There is so much emotion and question in it. I'm sorry that this happened. I know that sometimes life gets rough, but hang in there. And keep writing. It's a great way to get out your feelings. |