Awwe im sorry! thoguh thats a great poem you really have a talent for poetry! great job and keep up the great work 5/5!! and comment bak if you get a chance! thanks so much..bye...Adriana

Some kind of begging to god but it really made me sad,i'm always here if you want someone to talk,cos i saw you really depressed....don't worry,i wanna feel your smile:)

This is a really beautiful poem. There is so much emotion and question in it. I'm sorry that this happened. I know that sometimes life gets rough, but hang in there. And keep writing. It's a great way to get out your feelings.
~kiesha

I can tell your hurting when you wrote this but im just not feeling the loss. my mood did not change from the moment i started reading this poem to the moment i finished. pretty good just not the best

Soo soo sad. i'm so sorry for your lost, i know what it's like. you did a very good job on writing this poem! 5/5

~Kristina

There are times when repetition is bad, but in this poem it fits so well. It brings a tear to my eye. I'm so sorry for what happened, but she is in a better place now. Thanks to this poem many more people will know a little bit about a girl who they had no idea existed until now.

How sad.. i realli like it tho 5/5=]]