Oh,i got nothing to say about it,it really got me down,but everybody got family problem some dies some are horrible,so don't feel alone,and smile and hold your life tightly

I love the image of a chain seperated that slowly comes back together. You make me miss my granfathers, my little cousin, and my best friend so very much. Sometimes I wish you weren't such a wonderful poet. +sniffle+ Although you have shown that remembering can be something altogether wonderful, rather than bittersweet.

This is a wonderful poem u used a lot of good imagery the only thing this poem needs is a title I have few suggestions for 1 tell me what u think
"Waiting at heaven's gate"
"Picture of heaven"

Very nice message. Yet, the content is very redundant. It isn't very detailed either. Don't mean to be mean or anything.

"I" takes away from a poem's potential.

Just some constructive criticism. Take it or leave it.

Aww.. So sad but beautiful... Great job! My fav part was:

I miss you family,
I always will.
Hold on tight to what you hold dear.

:') Soo wonderfully written..
Keep it up! :)

Take care

Hold on tight to what you hold dear, like someone else mentioned before me, it catched my breath; Hold on tight to what you hold dear. I simply love it

PS could you commend the last poems I've written, they mean a lot to me. I'd like to get some advice from a writer like you (that line keeps popping in my mind)

You have demonstrated the sublime healing power of poetry by writing from you heart and soul. The big picture is consoling, and you captured it in this poem

Aww. I was touched deeply bby this poem. So sad. I felt tears wanting to come. The only problems in it were grammatical and along those lines. Other than that, your wording was good.

5/5.

I'm sorry for your loss. It's never easy to let someone go and it's good to bring closure with comfort which I think you have achieved in your piece. It's such a sad and emotional poem, yet, beautifully written. Lovely write.

Firstly, i'm sorry to hear of your loss. i'm sure she was/is a very much loved and missed member of your family. i know it's difficult to lose someone that close to you. i admire the fact you've managed to write about it in such a lovely way. your words seem to have a lot of composure and simplicity that's hard to maintain. well done.

in regards to reading and commenting my poems, please read my 4 latest and the poem entitled 'Less Than Average.' i'd love to hear what you think. i don't mind if you don't want to comment on 9 of my poems, so just the first 4 and the affore mentioned poem is fine. Unless of course you decide you want to [!]
well done again, you have talent.x