Comments : My Birthday

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It's sad but your words are really warm,i liked the way you express yourself,keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Awesome poem. Well written except for the first stanza, but you seemed to get the flow flawless after that.
    Utterly horrrrrrible thing that you must have gone through, losing someone like that.
    5/5
    (*wipes tears away*)
    ~Stephen White