by BeautifulDisaster Feb 1, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
They all say the same things. |
by Vanessa
The message was strong, and clear, once eagain the word choice was amazing.The story was realyy good, and once I again I couldn't keep my eyes off the monitor. Great job onb an excellent read 5/5 |
by Kaila
I liked it the rhythm was a bit off for me if there was one i just didnt think it sounded right together |
by e LIZ a beth
Great job!!! this is a really good poem. i love how you wrote it that has some significance to peoples lives. and the fact that poeple can relate just makes it so much better. GREAT JOB!!! |
Alot of places are like that...people like to make rumors and stupid crap up just because they dont like the person...and eventually every gullable person out there will turn on you...its got to be the most stupid social trait ever....but this was a good poem...im sure alot of people can understand how that is. |
by Bryan Raff
Once again, a good poem, but a lack in more mature vocabulary. Good message in your poem as well. Nice job. |