This too is so so perfect! you way you write is so great. i can easily read this, i love the way you write. i will read some more.

5/5 David

Bad sad glad mad.

AHH. Don't EVER used words like that. they're sooo mediocre. use real words! i do not want to sound mean or anything. but this poem, the language in it. is lacking. i am not being mean to you or anything, but just trying to help you improve. this poem, has potential. you can see the emotions,, but they're jus barely visible. you need to show them. make the reader not want to stop reading., make your poem claw at their emotions.

xzLauren

The flow was alright . But the message in this is so true . People always say what other people think shouldn`t matter -- But they go talking about other people and caring what others` say . `though it wasn`t GREAT GO0D -- I loved it .
..__MiNDYY

Once again, a good poem, but a lack in more mature vocabulary. Good message in your poem as well. Nice job.

Alot of places are like that...people like to make rumors and stupid crap up just because they dont like the person...and eventually every gullable person out there will turn on you...its got to be the most stupid social trait ever....but this was a good poem...im sure alot of people can understand how that is.

Great job!!! this is a really good poem. i love how you wrote it that has some significance to peoples lives. and the fact that poeple can relate just makes it so much better. GREAT JOB!!!

I liked it the rhythm was a bit off for me if there was one i just didnt think it sounded right together

The message was strong, and clear, once eagain the word choice was amazing.The story was realyy good, and once I again I couldn't keep my eyes off the monitor. Great job onb an excellent read 5/5