I love ur poem and i got to tell u
i have broke my wife's heart
i've left her down so many times
but i love her like the air i breathe
its funny to this very second just the
smell of her skin makes me nuts
every night when she gets ready
4 bed she puts on this show . she pretends like she does'nt see me staring at her she's so beatiful
she takes my breathe away . really
i astually stop breathing watching her
and i've been with her since 1982
yet drugs can even take this away
thats why i want out and i want
whatever life i can get . and i want this for u 2 i gotta stop writting right now cause i want to give her some
attenant thats g rated

I agreee very strong piece, very well written.

melissa

This is a really great poem, keep up the great work,

This was a very good write. I really thought this was well put together. The only line I wasn't crazy about was the fourth one. It sounds a little forced and I've heard it again and again. But it's good nevertheless. Nice job! And thanks for all your sweet comments!
Charisma*

Miss you where ru