My Best friend, My soul sister, dead

by Beautiful x Disaster   Apr 3, 2004


This poem was deleted off about death poems in the sad category, idont know why, but i posted it again....

Ally,
I wrote you a get well soon letter
You are an awesome friend, and couldn’t be better
You are the reason I didn’t commit suicide
You knew what I felt on the inside
We had so many inside jokes,
Most of them involving our folks
So many late night phone calls
We shopped together, always at malls
I was always there for you,
Just like you were there for me too
I knew you since I learned to walk
And since you began to talk
Forget all the lies
Let’s hang with the guys
Then March 28th came
Soon, nothing will be the same
You were walking home,
Part of the reason I’m writing this poem
Suddenly a car passed
It was going way too fast…
Leaving you on the ground
Soon after, you were found
Just about everything was crushed
To the hospital, you were rushed
I got a phone call
From your brother, Paul
Later that night at around nine
He said you were going to be fine
I begged my dad to visit you though
He paused, and it ended up being a ‘No’
They need to do an operation
All they really needed was your cooperation
But during this, your reaction was berserk
Because of that, the operation didn’t work
You took your last breath
Followed by that, came death
March 29th, 2004 at 11: 27
Was when my best friend went to heaven

R.I.P.-Ally
March 29th, 2004

--ALWAYS loved, NEVER forgotten--

Please watch out for another poem I'm going to put up on monday called, "Alley's View"

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  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Awww, this was soo good!!! I'm so sorry that this is true. Deaths are always tragic, but especially when its your best friend. I hope you're doing okay and I hope you feel better, I know that this comment is a bit too late to hope that you're doing better, because you probably are. Its a good thing you did, not committing suicide because of her. I'm sure she very much appreciates that. Great Poem, had me in tears. Take Care!

    xoxoSierraxoxo

  • 20 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    poem is very touching. i dont know what to feel if my bestfriend leaves me...

  • 20 years ago

    by RicaLo

    I am so sorry that this was a true poem. losing a friend can be tough, but don't worry... In the end you'll see her again. You can email me at reco2007cat@yahoo.com if you want to talk.

  • 20 years ago

    by ♥ Rejekted

    wow dude thats so sad sorry for ur loss thats a really great poem :-)

  • 20 years ago

    by Tina

    i am so sorry that is so sad!! i lost a friend too in july!!!