"dead, yet alive"
"locked inside my thoughts"

that should be really painful. I think we all do experience that in our lives(some more, some less) but we all have those moments. ouch, they can be too painful.
take care,
Marjan

Wow, I really liked this. Nice work.

I can relate to this poem. keep writing. i like your work. GB

I love this poem! i can relate to it!! great job! i give it a five outta five!!

Six years later and your stuff still hits me hard.

Love You