"I want to experience pain
So I can see
That what I'm going through
Is not as bad as it could be"

^^ that's my favorite part, i've felt like that before, it was horrible, but you'll get through it!
anyways... good job with this, the rhymes didn't seem forced, it flowed really well, and most of it had a really good rhythm to it.
keep it up!

Forever*Yours

I really enjoyed reading this. It was very well written and for me, easy to relate to. Great read! 5/5

Marcella

When i finished this poem, I looked over it one more time & found that there was nothing in it that I did not like!

your wording was wonderful & the overall theme was great! 5/5

A very good poem, but you start to lose the flow a bit at the end. 5/5