I'd do anything for you

I've read this poem before, and I gave my criticisms on it. Looking at the poem from a different view point, I still think that it is a cute poem and that the emotions you portrayed in it were genuine. great job. 5/5

Another great poem that u have written, i like the meaning of it, made me remember how i use 2 be like that, well 5/5 again

I thought that this was a very sweet poem. One of those really cute poems that everyone goes, "aww" too.

My only criticisms, is that when I read the && part, I actually read it as though it was and and; and it kind of threw off the flow & seemed a little redundant.

One other thing was the rhyme see & happy. I'll admit, I've used it before & I know that it is not the perfect rhyme. I would suggest trying to find something else to use there, but it would not affect the poem too much if you left it how it was.

great poem nonetheless. & cute theme.
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5/5

Aww so sweet lol. It really was a lovey dovey crush poem, and it was enjoyable to read.
Firstly let me ask, what's the purpose of the && at the beginnng of two of the stanzas, is it a typo? It just doesn't make sense...
The fourth and fifth stanzas were my favourite, the lovely descriptions in there just pulled the heart strings.
In some places the overused points began to sneek in, which I guess is easy to do with a poem of this subject, but in my opinion a poem is better without cliches.
Some rhymes were a little predictable too, like you and true, know and go. But then you used rhymes like smile and worthwhile which were quite different.
Overall a sweet poem.

There are some slight problems -- And could you edit the ill there that`s supposed to be I`ll ? It`s a pet peeve -.-'' But yeah . it was still an amazing poem [: I could totally relate & I think the rhyming was great .
..__MiNDYY

Oh & "monkey"[: