Broken

by Rachel RTVW   Feb 2, 2007


Broken hearts, love's deceit,
pieces fall down to my feet.
Broken promises, love's a lie,
puddles form from tears I cry.
Broken dreams, love's illusion,
sorrowed cause of your intrusion.
Broken hope, love's a game,
doesn't last, ends the same.
Broken sleep, love's the cause,
digs at me with sharpened claws.
Broken spirit, love of sorrow,
stolen now is my tomorrow.
Broken life, love is lost,
Broken now and that's the cost.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Naiomeeh

    Wow..this was amazing..!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Samantha

    Fantastic !! I can relate.

  • 14 years ago

    by Anthony M

    The way that you penned this reads differently than most in this genre; it doesn't seem to be stated in a sad tone so much as it does in a matter of fact, disassociated tone, or maybe that's just me. In either case it's nicely written and unforced and the form itself is a welcome change of pace.

  • 16 years ago

    by ~ღ~ jeSSica ~ღ~

    Omg, i can feel the pain in this short poem.. =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Rhiannon

    This poem is amazing.
    you are a wonderful poet.
    i feel the pain and emotion.

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