At times painful yet rewarding to be so deeply in touch with your creativity. Yer gud.

Thank you for the comment i thought i would return the favour lol. I read through your poems and thought this was really individual i really like it. 5/5!

This poem was quite creative expecially the first lines. I found the use of "london bridge" to be effective and really interesting. Overall the flow was good and this was a great read. Well done, ~mel

I liked it. It was different. The flow seemed to be a little off. I gave it a 5/5.

Great poem!!..keep it up!...loved the deepness and emotion in it!...never stop writing!
bree

I liked the decsription in this poem, but I think there was so much too it that it kinda hindered the main message of the poem. Your vocabulary is well done too and the flow was good Plot121

Great poem, so powerful! Choice of words is superb and imagery is very vivid.
my favorite stanza is:
"Its like this London character
scares me with her darkness
But deep down I am just like her
and resisting her is pointless"
^ Excellently written lines.
Great job on this one, keep up!
5/5

It was pretty imaginative. I really liked the choice of words and the flow through it.

I liked each lines and the use of the song fits perfectly. Another good job.

O.O I'm WOW'ed. Seriously, A very well-written dark poem. Though the rhyming may hae been a bit choppy here and there, It was just...Fantastic. 5/5 Well done!

Happy writing,
Hannah-