by Mo Feb 2, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Their quick cheap laughs deserve no spade |
U r incredible...ur poem is really a masterpiece...u r really talented....keep up the good work:)...100/100 |
by Edward D Zurovec
Wow! This Poem pulled me in, I can see those laughing Clowns, Harlot contortionists behind makeup, hiding their true selves. |
by Marc Ortiz
I really love the opening line :) And the title was really good. I like your choice of words. Flow was smooth, well done |
HeartfelT anD nicelY writteN ... |
by Robert
The vocabulary again was great but there was no real history of why you felt such loathing for clowns, That may be a good point to add Plot121 |