Very deep and beutiful! keep it up

Very meaningful. this gave me an idea for a poem myself thank you. ever since i moved its been hard to write. i have wrote about 4 poems since i moved so i thank you. thanks. Great poem wonderful wording. it sounded as it already had a melody to it. very good very good.

Nicely penned. I like your word choice in this one. Good rhythm. Good job!

This is such a pretty poem, so deep. i liked it alot

much love and many kisses,
bex

Nice flow great job!!