Lame

by Michelle18   Feb 2, 2007


Im so sorry for what i've done,
i never thought i would do that to anyone.
i didnt mean to, i swear its true,
i never meant to do anything to hurt you.
it was an honest mistake,i dont know what i was thinking,
it must have been because i was drinking.
she just started to kiss me and i didnt stop her at all,
i just let her give it her all.
please forgive me, i want no one but you,
if i lose you i dont know what i will do.
well to me thats all bullshit because they all say the same,
im not going to believe it this time because its all so lame.

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yea i know your probably thinking that the only thing that is lame is this poem, right? lol...well i wrote this poem in like 5 minutes so yea its not that good.

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  • 16 years ago

    by M I L L Y

    The poem is great to be done in 5 mins but you should work on the flow 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lindsay

    I got: teen drama, stupid common mistake, and capitalisation errors out of this poem. Please capitalise properly! I could have enjoyed this poem more if you did. As it is, I do feel the title of this poem is accurate, sorry. No use writing poetry about the situation, and I really doubt you actually felt better after writing it. Bad mistake, and one that the only repentance for it is to accept the consequences of your actions (or inactions, as it were).
    I wonder if this ever worked itself out?

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    I think this poem is great because a lot of people can relate to it.. people do stupid things when they drink that end up ruining things later on.. and this is a great way to put it to words.. even though you wrote it in 5 mins lol.. nice job.. i liked it =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    You had a spark of creativity there that was good and the story was played out well I guess all is not lost little one Robert

  • 17 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    Well
    not as beautiful as other your poems, but that's it and i like the idea of the poem.
    actually when i was reading the first part i thought that apologize is putten in such banal words that it makes the poem quite poor, but as i reached last 2 lines, i realized why it was made so!!

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