All poems you do are great. and never think otherwise. this is a great example, i voted 5 on in, its excellent.

i loved it. and so far so does everyone else.

David

This poem is ok=/ even though i thought of it the wrong way...ewwww...lol

I think its way good for 5 min nice job! 5/5

Maybe the rhyming was a bit generic, but i liked how it kind of had a twist at the end and still displayed true feelings, which is very important in poetry. well done 4/5

You are a good writer and your work has real good flow but I think you come up scratching the surface of the thruth and never really hitting the core but good none the less keep it up you will get there Plot121

I like this poem, very well written..that crap is pretty lame cause i herd it b4 to

For me...the lesbian idea popped into my head..not such a great one and it kinda took away from the power of the poem. also the swear word at the end isn't needed, just kinda made a break in my thoughts cuz i hadda force them to skip that word which messed the poem for me personally. i love the idea of the poem however it just needs a ting of editing.
nice job 4/5

All ur poems r great i wih i could b as good as u KEEP UP THE GREAT JOB once again 5/5

Not a lame poem. very sweet and truly apologetic. good job. <3

Well
not as beautiful as other your poems, but that's it and i like the idea of the poem.
actually when i was reading the first part i thought that apologize is putten in such banal words that it makes the poem quite poor, but as i reached last 2 lines, i realized why it was made so!!

You had a spark of creativity there that was good and the story was played out well I guess all is not lost little one Robert

I think this poem is great because a lot of people can relate to it.. people do stupid things when they drink that end up ruining things later on.. and this is a great way to put it to words.. even though you wrote it in 5 mins lol.. nice job.. i liked it =)

I got: teen drama, stupid common mistake, and capitalisation errors out of this poem. Please capitalise properly! I could have enjoyed this poem more if you did. As it is, I do feel the title of this poem is accurate, sorry. No use writing poetry about the situation, and I really doubt you actually felt better after writing it. Bad mistake, and one that the only repentance for it is to accept the consequences of your actions (or inactions, as it were).
I wonder if this ever worked itself out?

The poem is great to be done in 5 mins but you should work on the flow 4/5