That was very good. I really liked it a lot.
Great job. 5/5

Hey! wow the whole thing was just beautiful! the variety of words you used was just so...beautiful sarah! you have very good imagery, it was like i was there, this poem had so much emotion. i really felt it. although the there isnt a definite structure i still liked it a lot.(i prefer structured poems to free lance) but this one just blew me away!

5/5

Thanx kayla i'll take your advice

Thhe name of your poem is how i felt @ the end of it! it was just ... wow! well done.. could u read some of my poems plz????

Thanx for reading my poem everyone leave comments or advice and i'll read your poems

I read every single one of your poems and I don't think as long as I've been here I've found anyone who is such a majestic writer. This one really paints a picture for me as I wish that someone would come and save me from my pain and misery. All your poems are so good. It's so amazing.

Pamela:)

I really liked this peom of yours.... sad to confess but i haven't read any of yours until today and im kinda hooked. haha. great job and keep up the great work.

<3Mary